The Pilot

[diabolicalfiend]

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"Who let the Mountie in cells?"

"This is your job?!?"

"I have a hunch, Ray."

"You killed my father."

"Do it right this time."

"Go ahead. Shot."

"Here's the hundred I owe him."

Comments

[mergatrude.livejournal.com]

Hee!

That was so much fun! Very clever.

(Although I think for the Unsolicited Feedback you could have selected "Strangers, too" *g* )

[diabolicalfiend.livejournal.com]

Well, I thought about that, but it was more about the father's death rather than the dam issue. Eric didn't seem to care terrible much.